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Romance FantasyI think I think I think too much in fantasy and dreams and such-Romance Fantasy
I think about what we could do
if we had time, just me and you; swim naked, stroll along the stream, roll under golden sunset beams startling partridges to wing.
You could read sonnets or sing love songs, and play your violin to try to make me cry again with notes so glorious and pure they'd play forever in my ear.
I think I think I think too much of fantasies and dreams and such.


Cat MathGeometric impossibility:Cat Math
Twenty- two pounds of calico
cannot fit within the confines of an equilateral triangle of sunlight twelve inches on each side.


ExpellerationThe less he says the more I seeExpelleration
frustration and futility in thinking things will change for me by looking to simplicity, assuming nothing, pouring tea down drains. My brains in absentee provoked his soap-box reverie but I mistrust validity in one who touts tranquility
but flouts mental telepathy, and disregards things he cant see.


Bare FloorsMy plywood never slivered into stabs of shivering agony,Bare Floors
imbedded in my bare sole, felt its hard chill, until
I walked across his Savonnerie, was floored by tiny touches, laid micromosaically.


IndifferentiatePretend I never promised anything- your helps too complicated to accept. On every care and concept you've tied strings, each lesson leaves me awkward and inept, defeated, bowing to another king, your only aim- to make yourself adept. You couldn't care if I should fail or fall, so nearly nothing, infinitesimal.Indifferentiate


Lives Plan I, II, IIII. EssaysinationLives Plan I, II, III
I'm working on an essay
that's driving me insane. If you should hear a big kaboom it's probably my brain exploding into shrapnel at last kaput, defunct, or, if you hear a screech and thud it's safe to guess I flunked. I dreamed I'd be a writer so clever, witty, cool. Reality's a bitch my friends; Plan B: Truck Driving School!
II. Back to Plan A
So much for Trucking School- it was a flop. I couldn't make the damned rig start or stop. My eyes could barely see above the dash, the minute that I rolled, ther


Drawing BoardI have a headache,Drawing Board
a messy bedroom, mint Kisses, split ends, nine windows open, Dvořák on Youtube
a leaky fish tank three less books to read, nine hundred dollars, spring fever, Tivo, twenty-five years served, ravaged fingernails, Mannys autograph, no car, cash, job, guts, vodka left, papers or clue what to write at three of midnight as the NaPo bell echoes in my ears.


Foxhole LogicYoud think youd know someone after spending half a lifetime by their sideFoxhole Logic
then something happens that makes you ask if this in fact is truth or delusion.
Its easy to lose your way crouching house-coated beneath the word Wife.
No one said intelligence was easy. Buck up. Hide the fucking guns.


PrioritiesI don't think I will ever understand why teacher's aids are paid ten bucks an hour in towns where barely literate idiotsPriorities
with resumes containing one word: Penis make thirty mowing lawns and watering flowers.


Romance FantasyI think I think I think too much in fantasy and dreams and such-Romance Fantasy
I think about what we could do
if we had time, just me and you; swim naked, stroll along the stream, roll under golden sunset beams startling partridges to wing.
You could read sonnets or sing love songs, and play your violin to try to make me cry again with notes so glorious and pure they'd play forever in my ear.
I think I think I think too much of fantasies and dreams and such.


Cat MathGeometric impossibility:Cat Math
Twenty- two pounds of calico
cannot fit within the confines of an equilateral triangle of sunlight twelve inches on each side.


ExpellerationThe less he says the more I seeExpelleration
frustration and futility in thinking things will change for me by looking to simplicity, assuming nothing, pouring tea down drains. My brains in absentee provoked his soap-box reverie but I mistrust validity in one who touts tranquility
but flouts mental telepathy, and disregards things he cant see.


Bare FloorsMy plywood never slivered into stabs of shivering agony,Bare Floors
imbedded in my bare sole, felt its hard chill, until
I walked across his Savonnerie, was floored by tiny touches, laid micromosaically.


IndifferentiatePretend I never promised anything- your helps too complicated to accept. On every care and concept you've tied strings, each lesson leaves me awkward and inept, defeated, bowing to another king, your only aim- to make yourself adept. You couldn't care if I should fail or fall, so nearly nothing, infinitesimal.Indifferentiate


Lives Plan I, II, IIII. EssaysinationLives Plan I, II, III
I'm working on an essay
that's driving me insane. If you should hear a big kaboom it's probably my brain exploding into shrapnel at last kaput, defunct, or, if you hear a screech and thud it's safe to guess I flunked. I dreamed I'd be a writer so clever, witty, cool. Reality's a bitch my friends; Plan B: Truck Driving School!
II. Back to Plan A
So much for Trucking School- it was a flop. I couldn't make the damned rig start or stop. My eyes could barely see above the dash, the minute that I rolled, ther


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| A link to my Daily Deviant feature, 10/1/09- [link] |
Snarling Tree
Frosted Oak
Bleeding Tree
Globe Thistle
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I tell you such fine music awaits in the shadows of the fires of hell. -Charles Bukowski
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White light,
Sorry
Thank you for featuring my poem, and thank you for telling me- I am still finding my way around here. I am honored to be featured on your page, happy you found something to like- you picked one I like too. Many thanks again for the recognition.
White light,
Sorry
Take a look at my latest deviation if you like, id appreciate the constructive criticism etc
Thanks, Keep up the great work
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Please take a look at my latest deviation Here, Thanks
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An Irishman has an abiding sense of tragedy that sustains him through temporary bouts of joy.
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I know how the devil sleeps at night
He lights the fire behind my eyes
And he lets it there and I let it lie
I know how the devil sleeps at night
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\\\" The accumulated filth of all their sex and murder will foam up about their waists and all the whores and politicians will look up and shout SAVE US , and I\\\'ll look down and whisper \\\'NO\\\' \\\".
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\\\" The accumulated filth of all their sex and murder will foam up about their waists and all the whores and politicians will look up and shout SAVE US , and I\\\'ll look down and whisper \\\'NO\\\' \\\".
Sorry
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Everywhere I go I'm asked if the universities stifle writers. My opinion is that they don't stifle enough of them. There's many a best seller that could have been prevented by a good teacher. --Flannery O'Connor
Sorry
Thanks again for your kind comment, I hope you will enjoy some of the poems I have listed above. White light,
Sorry
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I know how the devil sleeps at night
He lights the fire behind my eyes
And he lets it there and I let it lie
I know how the devil sleeps at night
Sorry
Thanks so much for reading my poem and for the kind compliments. I am happy that you've enjoyed this one, and YaY Vermont! Nice to know someone else appreciates this small but lovely piece of the planet! Have a happy day, white light,
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